Tag: copywriting

  • Your Customer Wants To Take The Easy Way Out

    From the desk of Razvan Rogoz
    Dear friend,

    This is a very delicious cake. My girlfriend bought it today for me.

    She’s such a sweetheart.

    It is delicious. It has been months since we’ve both ate anything sweet. It is mouth-watering.

    Why am I’m showing you this?

    (more…)

  • Will Copywriting As We Know It Cease To Exist?

    From the desk of Razvan Rogoz
    Dear friend,

    The answer is no.

    Many posts online say that the copywriting is dead. You can find this on forums, blogs and even in books.

    Copywriting is not dead. It is transforming. Yes, sales page formats may tend to change, to adapt to this new economy. Old long sales letters are not as effective as they were years ago because people tend to have a shorter attention span.

    However, for all intents and purposes, they still work. When you are selling, you still need to counter objections, give reason why, build momentum, create desire through the benefits of your product and so on.

    It does not really matter if it’s in a VSL or a 300 word copy or a 3000 word copy. It’s the same principle. Why? Because while the Internet may have changed a lot of things, we haven’t. The only major change is that we are fractionating information, that we are focusing more on small bits than on the big picture.

    This is due to services like Twitter or YouTube. However, we still need to be persuaded and seduced into buying something. Forget consultative selling. Forget selling without selling.

    Sales in essence are the same as they were three decades ago. So if you are wondering if you should use a sales copy, the answer is yes. It works and it will still work for a few years from now on.

    Best regards,
    Razvan Rogoz

  • The importance of emotional intelligence in mrkt / sales

    From the desk of Razvan Rogoz
    Dear friend,

    What makes a good copywriter?

    To be honest, it is not his ability to write. Yes, words are important. Words are damn important. It’s a vehicle to get your ideas and message across. But there is something more important than that. That is emotional intelligence.

    What do I mean by emotional intelligence? The ability to understand how people function and most importantly, how you function. A copywriter is similar to a hacker. He must break into a system and change something. He must get his attention, resolve his objections, make him desire his products and finally, get the client to take action.

    It’s similar to scanning a port, finding the right password, breaking the firewall, finding the right file to take and eliminating all logs.

    This may offend a lot of copywriters who believe themselves as artists. We are not artists. We are business people. We are no different from the Wall Street broker pitching stocks on the phone or the sales person moving door to door. Yes, we require a bit more sophistication but we are not artists. We do not write to get awards. We write to sell.

    And if you want to become a better copywriter, instead of keep copying sales letters by hand, develop your emotional intelligence. Go out in the world. Experience. Meet your prospect. Meet people who are obsessed with their weight to understand how the weight loss niche works. Meet 24 year old virgins to understand why the dating industry works. Go to a multi-level marketing meeting, sit through it two hours and network to understand how biz op work.

    Copywriting is a skill learnt in the real world. Yes, I also encourage you to read a book or watch a course on copywriting for at least 30 minutes daily but the bulk of your work should be out there, not in front of your office.

    It’s true, you can copy the masters, you can take every technique and strategy and apply it in a principle similar to “monkey sees, monkey does”. And it will actually work. It’s not that hard to sell. But until you understand the underlying principles of human nature, what makes people ticks, how we are these strange and wonderful creatures in the same time, you can’t win it big.

    Agree?

    Leave a comment in the box below.

    Thank you,
    Razvan

  • Features & Benefits

    From the desk of Razvan Rogoz
    Dear friend,

    There is a slight confusion between features and benefits. These two concepts are the building block of sales copy and persuasion in general.

    A feature is the physical aspect. The benefit is what it does.

    Feature: Word processor
    Benefit: It allows you to write your thesis

    Feature: Wordpres
    Benefit: It allows you to have beautiful sites without any HTML knowledge.

    Feature: Glass
    Benefit: It allows you to drink water from it.

    Both features and benefits are required when you are trying to sell. The feature is the “thing that makes it happen” while the benefit is “what happens as a consequence”.

    Best regards,
    Razvan Rogoz

  • 2011: The End Of Old-School Copywriting

    From the desk of Razvan Rogoz
    Dear friend,

    For a long time, I’ve made the classic error of thinking that copywriting is about creativity and writing. I’ve followed the old advice of writing sales letters by hand. I’ve read tens of swipe files. And I’ve done all of this with the purpose of writing like John Carlton or Clayton Makepeace.

    I’ve recently discovered that copywriting is not so much about writing. Actually, only 20% is the writing phase. Instead, copywriting is listening to your marketplace, understanding their thought process and language, putting everything in a logical sales process and editing.

    Practically, the copy is written for you, by the marketplace. Let me explain.

    Most copywriting books we’ve studied are 10 – 20 – 30 years ago. These are books created for an environment without Facebook or Amazon.com. These are books that were practical at that time but are obsolete now.

    Let me give you an example of what became obsolete. A few years ago, long copy always won. Long copy always outsold short copy. Or at least that’s what most copy gurus said.

    Now, you need to write just as much to get your point across. We live in a world of Twitter and Facebook. We live in a world where multi-tasking is a norm. We live in a world where bullets are used everywhere to communicate (example, text messages or Twitter status updates).

    So writing 30 pages is not a good idea anymore.

    If the prospect knows you, knows who you are and trusts you maybe you need just a few pages to make your promise and prove it. If you are a stranger to him, maybe you need 25 pages. However, it’s important to write just as much as you need to make the sale.

    Another tactic that changed is how we conduct our research. I don’t know if you’ve visit Amazon.com lately, but you’ll find your ideal prospect there. There must be at least one book similar to what you have and that book comes with reviews. Those reviews shows what the prospects wants, what he likes, dislikes and what were his expectations.

    It even shows the language used, a very good tool when you are going to write the sales letter. So instead of doing the classical “hit and miss” research, do something better – go straight to the source and listen to your prospect.

    Copywriting is changing. It’s becoming more and more marketing strategy. It’s not about how good of a writer you are but how good of a listener and strategist you can become. And this is the path in which I’ll invest in the next 12 months.

    Become less of a good writer (God knows, I can hire a read-proffer for 0.5% of the project fee) and improve my marketing abilities, research better and focus on creating the copy from the marketplace and less from my head.

     

    Razvan

  • How To Seduce Your Prospects Using Eight Different Types Of Bullets

    From the desk of Razvan Rogoz
    Dear friend,

    If you have gained any real world experience as a marketer, then you know for sure that creating bullets (also called fascinations) is a must-have skill.

    Sometimes bullets will make the sale alone for you … raising the emotional temperature (and tickling his greed glands) until the boiling point is reached … while other times is the perfect structure towards a persuasive argument.

    In the next paragraphs, you’ll find out 8 bullets types (with examples), that can transform even the inexperienced and immature copywriter into a power-selling machine.

    #1 – The “How To” formula

    By far the most loved and hated bullet in the copywriting world, this simple formula plays on our biggest need … the one for curiosity. People wish to discover things that are appealing to them and their lives … especially when the answer to these bullets is something that they are actively looking.

    • “How to decide if money markets funds are a good investment or simply an alternative to checking accounts?”
    • “How to use a little-known real estate secret to roll over your money as often as six times a year?”
    • “How to buy sugar for less than the cost of sand.”
    • “How to write “killer headlines” that nobody can ignore.”
    • “How to get your own talk show on “Vanity Radio” and make a profit every time you go on air

    #2 – The “Secret To” Formula

    Almost everybody loves a good secret … but everybody wants to know what nobody else has access to. This gives them an advantage over their peers … society … colleges … or anyone else.

    Two rules to creating a “secret bullet” though. The first one is not to overuse it. If you say secret after secret … then it isn’t a secret anymore? The entire value is based solely on scarcity. So please don’t use it more than 3 times in a letter.

    The second one is that you should make the secret oriented towards the benefit your prospect will receive. It’s about something that is directly appealing to his life, but not commonly know.

    Let’s see a few examples below:

    • The amazing secret of the best attention grabber in the world.
    • My secret hand holding technique you can use to give a woman “mixed signals” that make her curious and excited about you – pg. 49
    • The “big secret” no relationship book will ever tell you about woman’s body language (This will help you advance things with a woman TWICE as fast) – pg. 66
    • Use the most super secret cell phone techniques
    • The secret of the “schoolgirl’s beauty” revealed! Discover how you can have the same beautiful and healthy hair as a schoolgirl … without paying huge sums of money or spending hours daily!

    #3 – The “Why” Formula

    A bullet excellent for building intrigue in your prospect mind. The idea is simply – you promise to solve a mystery to your prospect … and show how the truth or solution has an huge impact on his life.

    In other words, you are acting like an early warning radar to him … preventing him from doing something negative in the future (passive or active).

    • How and why women TEST men… plus… a fantastic way to effortlessly pass every test she throws at you… even if you have NO IDEA that you are being tested! (The best part is she’ll become MORE attracted to you each time, because you’ll be earning her respect instead of losing it) – pg. 43
    • Why the so-called dating “experts” are dead wrong in their ridiculous theories of “rapport” – Here’s how you can create a powerful, instant connection with a woman by doing the exact opposite of what these “wannabe gurus” tell you – pgs. 45 & 46
    • Why three key commodities may yield profits of 600%!
    • Why you never get a second chance to make a first impression, and a remarkable technique that will “hook” everybody who even glances at your advertising!
    • Why not following this simple “extra” step when narrowing down your niche is like building a foundation on quicksand. So many people blindly do this when trying to get subscribers and later wonder what went wrong.

    #4 – The “What” Formula

    The “What” bullet is very easy. The basis of it is that you give instructions for a determined outcome. In other words, do this and you’ll get this.

    For an extra touch, use curiosity or intrigue to keep your prospect hooked.

    • What you must do at once if you receive a mild shock when you touch an electric appliance – page 26
    • What Corporate Fat Cats don’t tell you about their CoQ10 supplements …
    • What your doctor doesn’t tell you about H1N1 … and how to become bulletproof yourself in the worst outbreak of the decade.
    • What you must do if you want to keep a woman interested in you FOREVER (This is THE KEY to having a long-term relationship with a woman… miss just this one thing and she’ll be on to the next guy before you know it) – pg. 89
    • The 4 laws of “unpredictability” and “excitement” – What “bad boys” do to give a woman that addictive rush of adrenaline that keeps her coming back for more (Follow these 4 simple rules and you’ll never have to worry about her losing interest in you… or losing her to another man) – pg. 4

    #5 – The “What Never” Formula

    This type of bullet alerts him of a possible mistake (that he is already doing) … and promises information to protect him from the outcome of that mistake.

    It is very efficient in most markets and can be used in almost any type of tangible product.

    • What never to take along with vitamin C … unless you want for its effects to be canceled.
    • What never to eat on an airplane. The dirtiest, deadliest airplane in the whole wide world.
    • What never to invest when the inflation rises … and how to secure your assets in the incoming crisis.
    • The absolute worst thing you could do when it comes to exercising …
    • Why you should never use an offshore account unless you are in these three situations … and how to secure your money against greedy lawyers and the IRS.
    • How many are you using in your current sales piece? You may use only one-two punch (practical + emotional benefit) … or you may opt-in for a diversity of bullets. In any case, almost every copywriter I know resumes to about 10 bullets at all times.

    #6 – The “Number” Formula

    This type of bullet it’s not a secret to anyone. It has been overused in almost any promotion known to man … starting from the “How to make friends and influence people” ad to the #1 product on ClickBank.

    The number formula is best used when you have multiple ways of doing a particular thing … or multiple elements for a certain theme (secrets, advices, tips, etc). It is very easy to be done and it adds curiosity and a direct benefit to the reader.

    • Five ways to repair your XBox 360 … even if it had showed the red ring of death.
    • Nine little known secrets about the signals a women gives to you when she is attracted.
    • The 2 places to touch on your own body when you are talking to a woman that signal SEXUAL awareness… and make a woman want to put her hands all over you
    • 6 key ways that women “size you up” during the first seconds and minutes of meeting you (Miss any ONE of these and she will see you as a “fraud”… or worse, a FRIEND… so listen up)
    • Nine mistakes done by almost any rookie golfer (and veterans too) … which will kill up your thrust even before hitting!

    #7 – The “Plus” Formula

    Best used at the end of any promotion, adding stuff to satisfy his greed. Its basics come from infomercials where the hosts adds bonuses again and again … making the deal almost a no-brainer.

    It also helps finish a bullet list with power and momentum …

    • PLUS: How to get $4917 in free grants from your own government this winter … even if you have problem with your taxes.
    • PLUS: Eight ways to get the most out of your car engine … even if it has more years than your kids.
    • PLUS: The biggest mistake you must NEVER do at an workplace … especially if you want to advance fast.
    • PLUS: My complete list of 4199 institutions which are happy to lend you money … without any securities or risks.
    • PLUS: The worlds two most powerful inflation fighting strategies … totally ethical and ready for use.

    #8 The “Right and wrong” Formula

    I’ve first saw this used by Eben Pagan in his copy … leading the prospect on a path (that he thinks is right) and telling him that he is wrong. You must start with something he already believes … like common knowledge, and bust him that this is the wrong answer.

    Also, imply that there is some benefit in knowing the right one.

    • Getting rich is all about working hard … sacrificing nights and selling your soul to the devil? WRONG! Page 41 explains you the true science of getting rich.
    • SUVs are safer than salon cars? FALSE! Page 11 shows you the 8 reasons why an SUV is a walking dead trap.
    • H1N1 affects only older people? WRONG! Find out why you are more vulnerable than ever … especially if you are between 21 and 30 years.
    • Buying flower wins a women hearth? FALSE! Discover the true reasons behind attraction … and how not to always become the platonic friend.
    • Using an LCD TV saves you more money? WRONG! Discover the true money savers on page 41.

    What you should do now?

    Well, go to your copy and see how you can implement at least a few of these bullets in your sales letter. Use the PLUS at the end … use the “Right … wrong” for some intrigue and the others for creating curiosity (and implying a direct benefit).

    Let me know how that went.

    Best wishes,
    Razvan Rogoz